today many people spend too much money on leisure activities. Is it advantageous or disadvantageous?
Leisure activity is what makes one’s life de-stressed and hence, worthy of living. So, the practice that a great deal of one’s income is attributed for the same is truly advantageous.
Admittedly, the ratio of satisfaction is directly proportional to the quantum of development that is tremendously supplemented by the leisure industry for which a lion’s share of one’s income is used up. Even though spending too much on leisure activity can be considered an extravaganza of luxury, the index of happiness conspicuously surges ahead with the utility of such actions that apparently make life more meaningful and romantic for which the lives of Europeans are mention-worthy since they are the ones who allocate a major portion of their revenue for leisure such as visiting far-away countries enriching their experience and lives.
Barring the exception of fiscal stress brought about by the reckless spending on past-time activities, the money flow created by it in a market cannot be forgotten as the spending is potential enough to create countless number of jobs propping up an economy and cushioning up its stability. Despite the fact that it is too dangerous for low-income group to go on spending spree, the impact of the leisure industry results in the creation and expansion of various infrastructure that becomes the face of a nation. On top of it, the bonding of familial affair and social connectivity on a broader spectrum are amalgamated into a more satisfied entity.
With that said, the spending on leisure activities evidently suggests a robust trend in all walks of life. However, wisdom will prevail if we can decipher how much is too much and if a fine line is drawn between income and expenditure with regards to spending on leisure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19031141869 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00072827134 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.547618752 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.666666667 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195539255475 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722375637386 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050470498535 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112363760613 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532875717929 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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