Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include:
Why you want to work in a different country
What type of work you will be looking for
Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend may be able to answer
Hi Nicole,
I hope you are doing well and this letter brings you the cheerfulness. I would like to inform and need suggestion on that I am planning to look for a job in other countries. My main objective is to settle abroad as well as find jobs which are suitable for my career. As you already know, I have completed a Bachelor's Degree in Computer Science and Engineering. So, i predominantly looking for a job in software sectors. In addition, as I have scarce exploration of other countries, so please assist me with the things which would really help me when I get there. Most difficult and essential things which certainly need immigrant is accommodation. I would like to know which online reference is useful to find my needs. So please mention those details and return back to the address which I mentioned behind the letter. Your suggestion is going to be helpful for my future endeavors. I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you.
With Regards,
Abc
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- many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem. 78
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- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 757, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ds. So please mention those details and return back to the address which I mentioned behind...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80449448012 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4574787712 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163119440516 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635433035558 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664816562721 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165863116689 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.