A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correectly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the mordern world.
Do you think that benefit of tourism outweighs it's drawbacks.
Undoubtedly, the trend of pilgrimages has upsurge in high amount. Therefore, it has become the biggest industry in the world. Hence, various locations in the world are accounted as a chief source of money. On the other hand, travellers can also be a source of obstacles related to such cardinal situations. In this essay the pros outweighs the drawbacks and I will share my viewpoints regarding this, before reaching to a reasonable summation.
There is an abundance of reasons to justify my viewpoint regarding the benefits of tourism. The tourism is a key to increase economy of host country because pilgrims try to explore numerous countries which are yet unseen by the masses and the trevellers also helps to increase the economy of various countries, because they spend on many goods which they need on their tour.
Despite it, there are few reasons due to which tourism has some drawbacks. Some travellers show their inappropriate behavior to other nations where they come to explore. To illustrate, using vulgar language when talking to the inhabitants and taking oppose actions towards the authorities of that countries. Sadly these kinds of things have occurred in the past and it is still pursued by the pilgrims. Eventually, the authorities should not ignore the mistakes which had been done by tourists in the past.
To sum up, through travellingevery region in this world with tourism, is getting a positive impact on their GDP. However, the authorities should also be wary of drawbacks of tourism and implement some serious precautions to tackle the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82882280237 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.05065927 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206125327335 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647234697665 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642507891319 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122880991655 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708600127252 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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