A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The statement claims that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that it is a necessity or a requirement for nation to give studies to its students all over nation in same national curriculum until they enter college for two reasons.
To begin, there are many kind of courses going on all around the nation and to choose them and then for the next step to choose course related to it for higher studies is difficult. For an instance if a student is living in some part of the nation and he is performing his studies in a particular subject say Computer Science and after the compeletion if he needs to go to another part of the nation where the courses related to computer science are very less in a number and therefore he cannot get admissions in the course of his desire due to merit or whatever reson then it is a disadvantage for him. If he is staying in one part of the country and for some reason he need to be shifted to another part of the country where there are no courses related to the study he has done so far then it would be disadvantageous to him.
Further, in recent times the curriculum for the colleges is almost same with regards to different colleges in a particular nation. For an instance, if a student joins new college in any part of the nation he would study the course which will be helpful to him for his job prospects or a startup all over the nation. He does not need to learn any particular course to get a job in another part of the country if he is studying in different part of the country. If all the students all over the nation are taught the same national curriculum until they enter college then it will be helpful to them as they would be familiar to the primary language in which they would be taught in the college if it's different from one state to another state of the nation. They will have proper knowledge regarding the same course they are going to study.
Of course , many people of nation argue that there is no need for this but it would be great for students so it is necessary to implement this. If this is implemented it will give more better results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...r two reasons. To begin, there are many kind of courses going on all around the nati...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... reasons. To begin, there are many kind of courses going on all around the nati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem and then for the next step to choose course related to it for higher studies ...
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... a job in another part of the country if he is studying in different part of the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing in different part of the country. If all the students all over the nation are...
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Suggestion: ,
... they are going to study. Of course , many people of nation argue that there ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s so it is necessary to implement this. If this is implemented it will give more b...
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...is. If this is implemented it will give more better results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38995215311 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42970445802 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.377990430622 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1126159993 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.916666667 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435187229677 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216166095563 0.0831039109588 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.249753149335 0.0758088955206 329% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32562504439 0.150359130593 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.281079225681 0.0667264976115 421% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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