music is an important as other subjects in school
The importance of music is an important as other subjects in school to promote learning in children life which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which i will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that music is important part of children's life as they learn many things by listening music. Consequently, it will help to do work properly they learn moral and ethics value. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that if they spend same time to listening music become they are more interested in doing their school work. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoints, here are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that it is very helpful in their life. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of promote the music subject in school are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90041493776 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61060820865 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3133689934 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255327381464 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787276749782 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132505608104 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139054551922 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908979299661 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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