You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner.
Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better.
Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.
In certain nations, parents choose lie partners for their children, whereas in other cases and nations, people have the right to choose the person with whom they want to marry. In my opinion, I do believe that since marriage is the most important decision in a person’s life, they should choose their groom or bride with whom they are comfortable and can live a happy life.
In several countries parents take the marriage related decisions for their children as they have an opinion that they do not know about the world and people so they might take wrong decision in choosing their marriage partner. Moreover, parents love their children unconditionally and are over-protective, taking best decision which will make them to live a happy and successful life. Furthermore, parents will choose the partner who is financial and emotionally strong and of same religion and culture, so that it is much easier to raise children and to keep alive their ethical values and the divorce rate will be low. To elucidate, in India, parents choose life partners for their children
However, people in other countries prefer to choose their partners themselves as they have an opinion that they have to live with them for entire life. People before taking the marriage decisions get familiar with the person, having knowledge about their likes, dislikes, habit, interest, temperament, and after analysing carefully decides to marry or not. Additionally, they believe that before, marrying one should know that their nature and interest matches with them, as this will reduce the chance of conflicts and divorce. To exemplify, in countries like Canada and America, people have the right and freedom to marry the person they want to.
To conclude, I vehemently agree the privilege to choose lie partners not only reduce the rate of separation and fights but also increase love and understanding among couples.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to lie'
Suggestion: to lie
In certain nations, parents choose lie partners for their children, whereas in...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mfortable and can live a happy life. In several countries parents take the marr...
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Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choose life partners for their children However, people in other countries prefe...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to lie'
Suggestion: to lie
...ehemently agree the privilege to choose lie partners not only reduce the rate of se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15483870968 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60013607264 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506451612903 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4454641426 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.8 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194490601625 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886315946101 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431359264901 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120667411912 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498304547015 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.