12. You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• give details of your visit to the restaurant
• mention the reason for the celebration
• say what was good about the food and the service
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my delight on the excellent service and high-quality food offered by your restaurant “Hotel Radisson”
Last Sunday we organised a party on the occasion of 50th marriage anniversary of my parents. It was small get together of family and friends. The services provided by restaurant was excellent. The place was decorated beautifully, the waiters were extremely professional and polite.
The current food and beverages menu offered a variety of dishes as well as cocktails and mocktails. The quality and the quantity of the food was very satisfying. Moreover, the way the food was presented was extraordinary. The waiters also were very experiences in suggest us the food we should order.
We ordered black pepper chicken and hot chilli garlic noodles. The quantity of food was apt and every one was satisfied. Furthermore, there was a perfect blend of black pepper in the meal. The chicken pieces were also perfectly cooked. The noodles were also very delicious.
Everyone enjoyed the meal and I would like to thank you for efforts made in organising the party.
Yours Sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...re extremely professional and polite. The current food and beverages menu offered...
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...hes as well as cocktails and mocktails. The quality and the quantity of the food wa...
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...he quality and the quantity of the food was very satisfying. Moreover, the way the food was present...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he waiters also were very experiences in suggest us the food we should order. W...
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Suggestion:
...rty. Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2513368984 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89953999947 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.669290256 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4666666667 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173260905837 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545883356912 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389851509755 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915680439418 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387447721502 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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