Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
No doubt increase in the rate of abortions has become a matter of serious concern. Various people believe that this is a compulsory to reduce birth rate, but some assume it is an illegal activity. Both aspects have its own merits, which will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
Coming into a physical relation without knowing about the fertility period of women create pregnancy. Sometime it is just for entertainment not for the purpose of giving birth to new life. So, in that cases, after the confirmation of true reason behind the abortion should be allowed. It may help to reduce the rate of growing population. For example, after having 2 children if a female wants abortion to stop the number of family members she should be allowed and even awarded, because she promotes this way to control birth rates. Hence for these kinds of purposes abortion is legal.
In the expectation of male child, people sometimes take chances of pregnancy again and again but, after confirming the unwanted sex of the child they get abort that innocent life. In those circumstances’ abortion should not be declared just illegal but it should be penalized with heavy fine and imprisonment. To illustrate, as per survey report more that 25% miscarriage is due to conceive of women child and police arrest 30 parents in these cases. Therefore, if the motive behind a downfall is malicious then there should be restrictions.
Conclusively, abortion is not wrong if it is in the favor of controlling overpopulation, but if it is a reason of any violence then it is an enormity and should be stopped by imposing strict laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...omotes this way to control birth rates. Hence for these kinds of purposes abortion is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98168498168 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8756421863 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1872851131 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262102304852 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845670226584 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583597399003 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150190162325 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414755798403 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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