Drug abuse, is becoming increasingly common in the world today.
What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse and what are some of the measures that can be taken to solve these problems?
It is an indisputable fact that drug misuse has become more popular from all walks of life. This essay will examine the rationale for this development, and suggest the feasible behind solutions to this.
There are several problems as a result of drug addiction but the main problems related to health consequences and a higher rates of crime. Looking first at the former, people who have a tendency to overdose drugs might be unable functional brain normally and put them-self in danger. This may lead them to require staying in hospital for long-lasting treatment with financial burden on them and their family. Another problem is after using drugs too much for a long time, they are likely to face with financial issues so burglary and robbery consider to be instant ways to get over this. Consequently, they become social burden as an undeniable fact.
Apart from the aforementioned problems, the first solution is to educated them about the danger of using drug abuse. It is vital play a role to avoid them causing mistake to affect society and protect their health. The second rationale is that families need to encourage them by love and compassion, it help addicts to be more appreciated.
In conclusion, although overdosing drugs are able to cause many issues, steps can be taken to tackle these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...courage them by love and compassion, it help addicts to be more appreciated. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, second, so, apart from, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01357466063 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.643169204 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665158371041 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8028350303 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.727272727 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189598236387 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695408600623 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576385684453 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11047206924 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552511299567 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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