what are the advantages and disadvantages for children of TV?
In present times, television has found its place in our lives. one cannot imagine a house without a television, especially the one connected to satellite. From times when it offered two channels, we are now in an era where we are caught in the stampede of different channels.. Although television has had an impact on all, it leaves a great impression on the minds of children.
Let us begin by looking at the advantages of television on the lives of children. one of the main positives of watching television is that the horizons of a child get expanded. For instance, a ten or below year child watching discovery channel or history channel or for that case any of the knowledgeable channels, gains more knowledge than his/her peers reading books.
Secondly, even though a child often prefers cartoons, there are many cartoons where one learns great things and even more the imagination of the child is improved. Take doraemon for example. Every episode of this show teaches either moral or scientific things. when the character of the show gets beaten up for lying, the child understands that he/she must not lie.
Turning to the other side of the argument, uncontrolled television is a major problem. In a study it was seen that a child watching more than one hour of television daily tends to be more aggressive than the one who watches less of TV. even more a child seeing the fights or other aggressive shows, could try to imitate them and get himself/herself hurt.
Another issue is that, more than often a child gets attracted to the lives of television stars that they end up watching it for hours. this not only has negative impact on their health but also distracts them from their studies.
To sum up, television is like a weapon. one can either use it to protect or harm oneself. Personally, I believe television is watched under the strict guidance can prove to be a boon for the child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80120481928 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66630072004 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7954834282 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105207157191 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333319947411 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458794458441 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541045834271 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362473032118 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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