Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
people's opinions differ as to whether or not government should emphasize to build the railway service, which is reliable for the citizen. While I support that railway transportation is vividly worthwhile to access in any destination. However, I partly agree with the assertion.
To begin with,railway is the popular mode of transport throughout the world, because people can reach their destination with the exact time.Moreover, it is noteworthy that the fare of the railway is much lower rather than the vehicle modes. In other words, most of the developing and underdeveloped countries people prefer to use this healthy service, they get at a time not only cheaper of cost the ticket price ,but also enjoying a thrilling journey.They can enjoy natural scenario in many parts ,while traveling from one place to another one. Indeed, it is quite famous for the student in many countries ,because they can chill out with their peers and fellow students in making some activities.Furthermore, to bring the regular commodities in any parts is more helpful to use such modes.China , for example , usually habituate to bringing their products or transfer these items by using such mode and is trying to make a model known as silk road throughout the Asian and European continents,which would not only grow up their economy, but also make the diversity in the world.
On the other hand, there are some, who argue that it is not possible to make the train service in all parts in any nation, because there are some remote and uphill places in the world, where science and technology has not reach yet, may not reach in the last two decades, therefore, to get this aesthetic facilities is a day-dream for them.In addition to this, most of the train lines have been fixed in the certain area, where are needed to go in depending the public modes that run away in the road.Again, tourists prefer to travel in using public modes let alone private one.They feel comfortable to travel this mechanical innovation, which can get a lot of amenities at a time ,while traveling from one to another.If a group of tourist travel in the hill sides, for example, they have to access in another natural sites to know and see these eye-catching beauties.So, all can possible by using such mechanical mode.
In conclusion, it seems to me that railway service do not have to suffer the traffic congestion in the street,which is worthwhile all walk of people in the state.Although, it reduces the risk of accident that interrelate in the road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95058823529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90335227758 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 269.021810222 49.4020404114 545% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.0 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.125 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.25 7.06120827912 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829107688119 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623431524948 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561323453666 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068452106907 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561341155643 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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