While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devasting impact in our world. Discuss both sides and given your opinion.
Nowadays environmental problems represent one of the most recurrent theme discuss by our modern society. some people believe that global warming should be considered a priority in terms of problems solution. However others believe that deforestation symbolize the worst scenario to the environment and because of this, measures has to be taken. both opinion has their importance and I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly we have to comprehend each problem. global warming means the increasing of temperatures from the oceans and atmosphere and is a result from gas emission around the world through industry activities and fossil fuel burning. Unfortunately this is a soaring issue since the industrial Revolution and can cause severe problems for the nature such as, melting glaciers, risen ocean water levels, animal species extinction, growth of dry seasons and so reduction of foods production. As we can see, deal with global warming is a pressing issue.
On the other hand, as some people believe, deforestation is considered also a large problem to solve, because extinct forests can affect radically the environmental as well global warming. The most common results of deforestation can be the changing of regional climate which causes reduction of locals flora and fauna biodiversity, extinct of rivers sources, changing of rain cycle, growth of soil erosion and elevation of the temperatures. Then as we can note, deforestation has influence directly in global warming.
considering this information, I can conclude that both problems need attention from our governments and society because they represent possibilities of environmental disasters. In my opinion, an international program about global warming and deforestation has to be taken by every country to avoid irreversible nature problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so, then, well, as to, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69424460432 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07882570876 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9800818225 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352010387587 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122657207035 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629451524954 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20709486704 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074565028368 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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