some people thing that there should be some strict controls about noise. others think that they are could just make as much noise as they want. discuss both views

Grammar and spelling errors:
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to begin i think that government should co...
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to begin i think that government should control th...
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...hould control the amount of noise first to much noisy can make the bad effect to h...
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... human health especially for the elderly , the noise can make some prognostic of h...
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...ise can make some prognostic of headache , ear hurt which can decrease health of p...
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...hurt which can decrease health of people , second noisy can cause distraction like...
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...y training exam to get the decent score cant be concentrate and noise can disturb wo...
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...oncentrate and noise can disturb work to . But otherwise it is think that the nois...
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...n disturb work to . But otherwise it is think that the noise can be accepted , they b...
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...se can make them happy like in a holiday , family sit down to take a conversation ...
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...ith each other to debate about something , or sometime noise is considered a type ...
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...e window or the door can block the noise , which allow people to work without the ...
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...se , which allow people to work without the disturb of it . in conclusion there are some ri...
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...people to work without the disturb of it . in conclusion there are some right reas...
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...ple to work without the disturb of it . in conclusion there are some right reasons...
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...are some right reasons to make the noise . Nevertheless . i think the lever of noi...
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... some right reasons to make the noise . Nevertheless . i think the lever of noise should lim...
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...reasons to make the noise . Nevertheless . i think the lever of noise should limit...
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...sons to make the noise . Nevertheless . i think the lever of noise should limit t...
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...sons to make the noise . Nevertheless . i think the lever of noise should limit t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68396226415 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51565110311 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 242.790774125 49.4020404114 491% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.25 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277223826107 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148680325911 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777953707284 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277223826107 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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