“Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.”
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Responsibility of various range of companies and corporations has always been a controversial issue. While some believes corporations should focus on their main goals which is making profit and improvement in the company. Indivisuals claim that taking care of the society is a part of their responsibility duo to the fact that they are part of the society and their emploees are living in it.
The main reason that some people argue is that a corporation is founded to create promotions and each person would buy its share if they determine company purpose is making money. None of stackholders do not want to lose their money in order to have better society condition. Although managers in all of companies try to maximize their profit, goverments and city cuncils introduce some legislations to prove the society rights. For instance to provide some laws to restrict air pollution, sweage water or waste materials. Likewise, they have tax legislation which all of the companies should pay and this fund can be used in different purposes to support the society such as constructing parks or providing facilities for disabilities.
However, some claim that companies are a part of the society due to the fact that their employees and maybe their customers are living in the same city so, caring of the city could provide good condition for both categories and could be such an advertisment for the companies. On the other hand, if corporation consider about different aspects of employees' life such as health insurance and sport facilities could attract better qulity persons to work for them. Therefore, the benefits of this policy not only will benefit people but also companies can hire better persons.
Finally, there are a number of legislations that force corporations to follow the rule and if they obey them chastisement for them could be directly like fine or indirect such as loseing thier prospects and face of the company which could lead to reducing costumers and revenue. In order to prevent future consequences, most of companies try to support sociey and resepct laws and people.
In summary, I believe although all of the corporations try to increase their revenue, some legislations directly and people prospect indirectly motivate them to support people and respect the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...kewise, they have tax legislation which all of the companies should pay and this fund can ...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...n order to prevent future consequences, most of companies try to support sociey and resepct laws ...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...eople. In summary, I believe although all of the corporations try to increase their reve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1329787234 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83132157252 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.764013249 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228506710466 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796112315551 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419377851554 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128859327778 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549862306241 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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