The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behavior
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is irrefutable that in this ultramodern era, in many nations, schools do not use physical punishment among the students, but some section of society believe that it should be used to for developing of students. This essay disapprove with above statement and my inclination will justified in the following paragraphs.
To commence, the first and foremost reason is, there are number of method available for enhance students behavior. School should make course according to the moral value, Ethics and culture by which learners can understand the gravity of situation regarding importance of them. As a ramification, they would try to change behavior and they would change their habits. Furthermore, always teacher should speak with sophomores on polite way due to which they would try to grasp the good communication skill and learn how to be polite with aged people. As consequences, they will give the respect to society. Moreover, in this hustle and bustle life, parents should spend quality time with their children. So they will learn number of good habits and enhance standard of living.
Conversely, there are few merits of physical punishments, to begin with, due to the fear of the punishment students will not behave rudly with other person and other children will learn from it. Therefore, children would become good citizens of nation.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited to the above statements leads to firmly assert that the mind of children is sensitive, so teacher and parents should behave good if they will not act judiciously then children will pay for it in the years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'justify'
Suggestion: justify
...above statement and my inclination will justified in the following paragraphs. To c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68514388894 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4008712847 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191806404974 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635709529365 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073686332419 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125469610935 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950781217207 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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