Healthcare should always be funded by governments, and it should be always be free for people to use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
facilities like medical should be sponsored free of cost for the citizens by the authories are being assumed by residents. I completely agree with the statement, because it helps to improve the health of individuals and also benefical to decrease death rate in a country.
Enjoying free health services can promote healthy eating habbits which, helps to decrease the rate of serious illness like cancer, asthma, because people will visit hospital for regular check up an follow the instructions of doctors to consume green organic vegetables, milk, yogurt etcetra. For example, countries in which government provide free health services record very few number of patients anually. They challange it is because residents try to eat nutritious food on the reccomendation of the doctors. Therefore this is way to raise the age limit of per person.
Moreover, it is a way to help the people of residing in the country, in their crucial period like helps in the costly treatment of some diseases like cancers. people who live under poverty line cannot able to afford the cost of these treatments so this kind of help can give them privilage to treat themselve under the observation of specialist and there will be less chance of death. To illustrate world trade cancer support financially to the vicitim of cancer diseases, which give them economical releif. Hence people do not need to feel hesitate from expensive treatment.
Conclusively, If government will give free health facilities to their residents then it can be a source of less depression on their mind related to highly expensive curement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22605363985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72759263833 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6149433884 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173093460746 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642627741549 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742609639029 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115079089612 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712327439324 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.