Some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes, others think they should live with the younger family members. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Certain things are inevitable in life; apparently, growing old too. In the last part of their life, people have to undergo several difficulties, right from financial struggle to health issues. People who once lived inindependently cannot resist depending on family members or nursing homes during in their 70s. Even though few argue that old people should live in nursing homes, I am convinced that, it is every family member’s responsibility to be a care-giver to elderly people.
Admittedly, living in a nursing home in unavoidable circumstances has some benefits. Firstly, nowadays, life has become busier than ever. To cater to one’s needs, he/she has to work round-the-clock, which eventually refrain them from spending time with elderly family members. Secondly, nursing home for crippled elders has essential facilities to render to their needs, whereas some people cannot afford to have these facilities in houses. Finally, nursing care centers have their own medical consultants to monitor people on a 24/7 basis, which keeps elderly people safer than being at home
However, elderly people expect the utmost care and affection from their family members. As per the statement, “Blood is thicker than water”, people’s instinct is to live in groups, especially with their family members. There should be a care-giver from a family for elderly people to give unconditional care, since after all everyone eventually will have to pass through old age sooner than later. Further, elderly people love to live with their grandchildren; similarly, children learn their conscience from their grandparents.
To recapitulate, in my point of view, I totally support senior citizens living with their younger family members. On the other hand, during unavoidable circumstances, staying at a nursing home is also safer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, after all, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58510638298 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96699819952 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3643168344 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310805552081 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11034399959 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688718794122 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202640664062 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164458819864 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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