You recently bought an expensive electronic product from store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager.In your letter,
Complain about the problem
Propose action for the store to take
Request confirmation that this is agreed
Dear Manager,
I am writing to you regarding a recent purchase in your store. I brought a costly item last week which is in clearance and after using for two days it is stopped functioning has expected.
I purchased a video game which is one of my wishlists. I felt so blessed and cherished after buying the item since it came in my budget. First two days it was worked well but after that, the video screen was hanging slightly. The next day it was completely stopped working. this item is having the 14 days of the return policy and one year warranty, so I don't want to make it repair because the item is brought just seven days back. I want to return this item and requesting you return the money by cheque or back to my credit card. The item order id is 123-3432-123. requesting you send me the acceptance confirmation and the return item order id at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... stopped functioning has expected. I purchased a video game which is one of ...
^
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ideo game which is one of my wishlists. I felt so blessed and cherished after buy...
^
Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...day it was completely stopped working. this item is having the 14 days of the retur...
^^^^
Line 9, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...turn policy and one year warranty, so I dont want to make it repair because the item...
^^^^
Line 9, column 570, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Requesting
...ard. The item order id is 123-3432-123. requesting you send me the acceptance confirmation...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49696969697 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52163457999 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9362231224 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4545454545 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830197037069 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395261957172 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750338619863 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922835235582 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674371397671 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.