Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Every youngster will be enthusiastic to drive a car from the day they become an adult of 18 years old.Most of the countries encourage an 18 old ones to start driving a car. But few persons think that is not the correct age to drive and it must be atleast 25. In my perception i disagree with the age limit to start at 25, In what view is explained to you in the following passage.
In these days starting to drive a car did not need any age limit.It depends on one smartness and flexibility to drive. As we know every individual prefer to ride a car as means of transport to save their time in these busy days.So immidiately after getting maturity of age 18 they think to drive individually.
Increasing 25 years as the boundaries of age to start driving is not necessary.In order to avoid accidents and wrong driving one must be well-known driving instructions and must follow all the rule.It does not depend on how young or old you are.Instead countries can take particular safety measures on road constructions.
After having considered all the points that I have discussed above,we can come to a conclusion that before giving a driving license to a person all the regarding tests must be done correctly and should check whether they are following all rules and regulations carefully or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69565217391 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77749530175 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8114459462 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.285714286 76.5299724578 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 16.8248392259 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347455110207 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171289649255 0.0766984524023 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548818556221 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207475234218 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106854210386 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 8.37731958763 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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