The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons Where relevant.
The diagram below demonstrates geothermal power plant which use water to produce electricity. As it can be observed there are five stages for converting geothermal energy to electric energy.
Based on the picture, first of all, cold water pumped down to 4.5 kilometers below the earth surface where the injection well conduct it to geothermal zone. In the third stage, it enter the production well where hot water pumped up to the condenser which is located at the earth surface.
As it can be seen, through fourth stage, condenser convert hot water to steam which is simultaneously enter the turbine. It powers turbine which is power generator in a same way. Consequently, generator produced electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enters'?
Suggestion: enters
...geothermal zone. In the third stage, it enter the production well where hot water pum...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entered'.
Suggestion: entered
... water to steam which is simultaneously enter the turbine. It powers turbine which is...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same way" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...powers turbine which is power generator in a same way. Consequently, generator produced elect...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, third, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83808823004 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5937431922 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155419631088 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856486706643 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875589106825 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117880149028 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084079113033 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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