Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?
Now more than ever obesity became one of the most important problems that our society suffers from. The number of obese adults, as well as children, were increasing rapidly from day-to-day and at this point, it is clear that we have an epidemic. With technological development, we are bound to a sedentary lifestyle and with it comes obesity.
From spending hours sitting in classrooms, studying in libraries, working on laptops or personal computers to leisure activities that include mostly video games, our physical activity was never as low as it is today. Eating unhealthy, irregular meals became an everyday thing for adults and children. Stressful and rapid lifestyle brought upon us modern-day illness that has to be fought against. Causes for obesity can vary, from genetic predispositions, stress overeating, lack of time for healthy cooked meals, however, the cost of healthy food exceeds fast food so that has to be one of the major excuses why most people choose unhealthy options.
Whatever the reason is effects on health are way too serious to neglect it as a deadly illness. High blood pressure, diabetes, lower back pain, heart attack are some of the negative aspects that obesity results in.
Whatsoever, there are some possible solutions that people can implement in their everyday lives. More physical activity, limiting the time that younglings spend indoors, meal preparation during weekends are some of the ideas to decrease obesity and an unhealthy lifestyle. On the other hand, lowering organic food cost would be one of the most important changes that would help people fight obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25769230769 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64703417825 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2437529492 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148513314923 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446159194478 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453930883051 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787997064426 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460373296486 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.