Some people believe that, learning subjects without being interested in them would not be beneficial. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true to say that without keen interest in any particular subject, one cannot be so beneficial by learning that. While it cannot be denied that learning always need a passion. I completely agree that learning always means to joy and interests.
On the one hand, it would not be prosperous, if people forced to learn something. Firstly they will not give their full effort to that subject, as they have no interests on that. Secondly they will skip important parts of the subject which they might feel boring . Finally due to not having proper understanding of that particular subject, they would not use their learning into their practical field.
On the other hand, if people are concern what they are learning, they will put their full energy towards it. As a result they will learn every points to carry out in their real life for being successful. Passion will lead them to learn perfectly and will help to engage them into the deep of that subject to complete it successfully. They will search for some more subject which are related to the main for supporting what they are learning.
To conclude, it is undeniable that without enthusiasm, one can not be benefitted by what they are learning.
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| 2020-01-07 | ashishctuv@yahoo.com | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nnot be so beneficial by learning that. While it cannot be denied that learning alway...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the subject which they might feel boring . Finally due to not having proper unders...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... subject which they might feel boring . Finally due to not having proper understanding ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... into their practical field. On the other hand, if people are concern what ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir practical field. On the other hand, if people are concern what they ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82775119617 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50373417264 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555023923445 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9625628438 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0833333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240260800042 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106932244575 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639734317442 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161100884821 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587010531723 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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