Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
In modern societies, citizens get the opportunity to choose whether to live in apartments or houses. There are different opinions about the benefits and drawbacks of these two types of domiciles, and this is the reason why they have their own fans.
Till a few decades ago, houses were the only place in which people can live. Those who prefer living in a house point out that no one can invade their privacy because neighbors live in farther distance. This accommodation is more convenient for pet lovers because they can easily keep their pets while some apartments are not pet-friendly. Also, people who enjoy green spaces prefer to live in houses. However, the maintenance expenses of a house are exorbitant because they should hire some workers for cleaning and gardening, so it is not a brilliant choice for low-income families. Another issue is providing safety. Having usually several entrances, houses are more in danger of burglary, especially when the owners are on a holiday.
Although apartments are one of the new options of living, they are so popular among people. Those who enjoy communicating with others believe that apartments are the best place for living because you can always meet your neighbors. Also, having a security guard at the main entrance, apartments are usually safer places for their residents. Another positive point about this accommodation is that the common spaces are always spotless, and people should just clean their own flats. On the other hand, there are some regulations that should be obeyed in apartments, being bothering for some individuals. For example, there are usually time and noise limitations when residents want to throw a party to prevent any disturbance for neighbors. Sometimes having a bad neighbor who does not pay the bills or respect the building rules can be one of the greatest problems of living in an apartment.
In conclusion, while selecting to live in a house or an apartment depends on people's preferences and needs, in my perspective apartments are more convenient places to live by considering our modern lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1195335277 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75331671218 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2308884111 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.294117647 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340107800025 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106799373744 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107333805352 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236013956086 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125145913002 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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