As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
Human being are now technology oriented which has given them immense power to reslove problems. I agree with the statement fully as world is blind without technological support. From creation of earth till unimaginable future we deeply dependent. I would like to draw your attention on this recommendation with two evidences.
Firsly in ancient times people used to live without electricity and they sustained their life with hunting.After, revolution of creatures, we discovered many useful innovations which not only helping us for surving but also saving life of animals with technology. For evidence, when there was no mobile phone we need to reach a PCO booth & memorize the number but as everyone has now their own devices we don't need to note a number as we feed it in mobile, which is due to the mentioned transformation.
The authors recommendation, for detoriation of thinking power is true as in everyday life, from moring till bed we always looks support. As an example, earlier days we used to carry books in our schools but currently in the modern schools students are provided a kindle reader instead of books which will save papers which in turn will balance the ecosystem. In spite of these, the daily habit to pick up the books from home pupils have forget. It can realy impact there habit in near future.
Finally, to conclude I agree with the statement that we are in an era where we cannot survive without technologies but we should not disparate from our own feature of thinking ability.This basic gift from nature should be well utilized, and preserve properly to avoid the viceversa reaction of nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02189781022 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78145927572 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642335766423 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.8654321683 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164799510379 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060615765101 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451459008671 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980619443631 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030193988072 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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