Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communucation among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Benefits and drawbacks of television has been controversial issue in the American community lately. Television influences communication among social life and family members. People claim that television has some undeniable profit for people, on the other hand a group of psychological researchers state television impacts relationship and communication from many sides. There can be harmful side effects of television, besides benefits. Although both sides have several pros and cons, I am of the opinion that television has some drawbacks for communication. I will elucidate the details of my support with some tangible details examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, modern world has undergone strict changes, but people influence of them in some bad ways. Television is the biggest change in human history, because people can allow the many things. There are some series, magazine and sport programmes or films, however they impact on people mind and ideas. Family is the minor group in society, although there finds lots of people in family. Members need to talk with together. They spend too times on television programmes so they can not contact with other members of family. Television advertisement also have results in family relationships which are attracted to people interest.
On the other hand, people tell story to family members in old times, because there is not television or technological devices. They speak about ancestors stories and adventures, in order to transfer for next generations. For instance, some legends can be found in people stories which are ilyada and oddysea. But, in the modern time people do not tend to speak regarding old family story. They do not read enough books, and not share beliefs or opinions. They have to take information only television because of some habits.
Finally, many families have responsibilities to children who are learn gradually. They need to talk with family or friends in which impact behaviours. They do not spend times with a family organization or communication. Unless family members do not interested with children , they do not know anything about daily life. Especially, little children need to connect friends or family , but they can not find enough time.
To sum up, family is minor part of society, so it is significant for all of us. People used to contact with together since past times. If they do not aware of changes, television will be main factor of cultural degeneration. It comes with up unexpectable results due to the deficiency of communications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, in fact, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30392156863 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91850442089 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3465030417 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2857142857 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39285714286 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156187214876 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470705436845 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349970389657 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939404857515 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299707528543 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.