You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Studying abroad is very importent for students, this can be benefitial for tham to get new friends, be in new places, study a language, get to know to new culture, however it has its own advetiges and disadventiges. Most people think that they will like everything abrod but this is never the case. I would like to talk about what I will like and what will dislike from that experience and bring my freiends experience as an example.
To start, I would like to mation the cultural shock that I will get. Depending of country this can be likable or dislikble. For example my friend from my local university had a exchange program and had a really bad experince there. Locals there are not friendly and helpful. He could not suit herself in there and had a really difficlute time camunicating and making friends there despite being very friandly.
Moreover, I am a picky eater. I do not think that meals which university will ofer I will like, and I also know nothing about preparing food and can not do int for myself. Finding food that I will like would be very dificulte task for me. A few years ago after moving out from my feamly I nealt starving a few month befor finding good Italia restarunt near my home. Every day I peak a food from that place.
To sum up I have a fear from hight and never choos a aircraft to travel out of country. I used buses only, but this could be imposible if hosting country did not be accessible by bus. I can deffinitly clame that Traveling by airplane will be frustrating expirince for me.
Although all these reaons that I mationd are dislikable I think that overall expirance will be very likable and I can confidently say that If I had an option to study abroad I would choose that rather than staying in Armenia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... my friend from my local university had a exchange program and had a really bad e...
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Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
...g out from my feamly I nealt starving a few month befor finding good Italia restarunt ne...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nealt starving a few month befor finding good Italia restarunt near my home. Ever...
^^
Line 9, column 385, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...estarunt near my home. Every day I peak a food from that place. To sum up I have ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... have a fear from hight and never choos a aircraft to travel out of country. I u...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52336448598 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49947151371 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5273494121 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4117647059 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173448032198 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552706508309 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664999250106 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997412930571 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658925311671 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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