Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advent of urbanization and rise in the popularity of fast food, many health issues accompanying with obesity. After providing deep analysis on obesity, especially in wealthy countries, suggesting several way through which obesity epidemic can be ameliorated.
To begin with, people in rich countries are more productive, spending most of their time in the workplace due to which staying away to the self cooking. Food industries taking the advantage of this situation by offering ready to eat foods which are not healthier and following hygiene methodology. Secondly, people in matured countries squandering money on fast food, especially from branded food centers such as Starbucks, Dominos' and Pizzahut. For example, recent survey by food corporation demonstrated that U.S.A citizens spending money six times more on food comparing with mediocre country citizens. Last but not least, people not much worried about their food habits and deteriorating health conditions because government providing financial support on medical checkups.
However, if we observer diligently all above mentioned reasons, it is clear that every cause of obesity has an alternative. From the statement "Prevention is better than cure", from the schooling itself good food habits and sparing some time for exercise should be taught. Government has to enact such policy, food companies can instigate healthier food selling instead fast food. Government should not encourage obesity by providing financial support to get treatment. This policy should be abolished and make people responsible for their health.
To recapitulate, if above given way enacted in the rich countries, not only obesity but also some other health issues will be conquered. while government implementing the above given policies, people's support also most important to get-rid-off from obesity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73476702509 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8896447689 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7020598456 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115595772272 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469719963048 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566637643554 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896565206956 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499820746926 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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