Some people believe that technology has made a man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
It is often argued that the advancement in technology provides a medium of interaction among people, while others believe that the frequent usage of technology made person's personality more introvert. Technology dominates the human life today. It has been interwoven in our routine life. However, I agree with the former viewpoint in this essay and discuss both the opinion with examples.
The advent of the internet has bridged the long-distance communication gap between friends and families. As a result, one can connect to anyone and anywhere on this planet with click of a button. Social networking sites such as Facebook is prime example of this, where individuals can follow the updates of their friends and interact with each other without any geographical barrier. Therefore, cutting-edge technology is a worthwhile tool to be socially active.
On the other hand, there are certain people who hold different opinion and think that the excess use of technology desprives of real human interaction, which is an important aspect of every bond. Such as, mordern childern prefer to spend their time playing mobiles games rather than playing outdoor games. As a result, they do not get a chance to communicate with the children of their age. However, I believe that human interaction is still possible by playing online games such as chess and studying online with real people interaction. It also improves the level of cognition. In addition to this, individual can also join the group of online people of their interest to share their ideas and thoughts with each other.
To conclude, while technological advancement keep people closer and socially connected, some still feel that it as a reason for real human communication gap.Nevertheless, as long as we are careful about its right usage, the social benefits are clearly positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...reason for real human communication gap.Nevertheless, as long as we are careful about its ri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26351351351 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84974977436 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6058697501 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163014984918 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045726109687 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533196018881 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095578019326 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652062430251 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.