Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages
A gap year tends to impart knowledge and skills to students who want to explore things of their interests. As per the stated notion, after passing higher secondary school education, some students opt to travel or work by taking a break in between school and university education. This essay will outline merits and demerits arising out of this before coming to a conclusion.
Discussing the downsides first, without having necessary qualifications to work in an organization prior to university year is the possible concern. Not to mention, highly reputed companies always tend to hire staff having proper knowledge as well as necessary documents including diploma and degrees. They need highly skilled staff with proper skills and technical knowledge about job concerned. For instance, organizations including banks,hospitals, schools and colleges always recruit staff with proper knowledge and experience. Thus, school leavers cannot get job easily since they have just passed out high school and lack requirements. Besides, travelling requires expenses and to fulfil their needs and demands, they will take recourse of their parents. As a result, this is not a good idea to travel since they are dependent on guardians in terms of financial perspective. Apart from this, it would be difficult for them to pursue education after a gap year because of lost motives and concentration in studying. They become money-minded as well which is detrimental.
However, a gap year has multifarious benefits too. Firstly, youngsters can gain extra knowledge and benefit by exploring other cultures and societies. Needless to say, they can gain interpersonal skills if they work before studying in university which in turn boosts the confidence thereby it is valuable for individualism. Also, youngsters become self- independent and have problem solving attitude by working early which is essential in all aspects of life. They can become perfect in decision-making by working collaboratively in a workplace. Moreover, a sense of maturity is developed earlier.
As such it can be concluded that, however a gap year may have negative repercussions, gaining skills and maturity at an early age can be far more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, apart from, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44927536232 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04868567616 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597101449275 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2425604685 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9473684211 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128209811554 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364579454837 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039300793679 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745500819264 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488805493149 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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