You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In you letter:
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left you wallet in their house
Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear dave
I hope this letter finds you well. I can't get over all the fun we had last full week during christmas. Thanks a lot, for arranging comfortable stay for me at your beautiful apartment.
When i came back home, i realised that my wallet was missing and that reminded me of me keeping it in top drawer of blue cupboard in the room in which i use to sleep. In a rush to catch my early morning flight, i forgot to take it out.
It's a brown Gucci wallet which has my college identity card and around $110 in it.
It would be really grateful if you could courier that wallet back to me by this weekend. I insist you to use my money from wallet for the courier expense. I hope I'm not bothering you too much.
Thanks once again for everything
Best wishes
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... I hope this letter finds you well. I cant get over all the fun we had last full w...
^^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... at your beautiful apartment. When i came back home, i realised that my wall...
^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... apartment. When i came back home, i realised that my wallet was missing and...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r of blue cupboard in the room in which i use to sleep. In a rush to catch my ear...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...of blue cupboard in the room in which i use to sleep. In a rush to catch my early m...
^^^
Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... rush to catch my early morning flight, i forgot to take it out. Its a brown Gu...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ning flight, i forgot to take it out. Its a brown Gucci wallet which has my colle...
^^^
Line 15, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... wallet for the courier expense. I hope Im not bothering you too much. Thanks...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 644.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35135135135 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21459853617 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682432432432 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3400659867 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267026560956 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09958576863 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075408535828 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121896570534 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101199740221 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.