Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Based on the reason that people without experience are free to imagine, one can claim that imagination is more valuable than experience. However, this reason is inadequate to prove that imagination is more valuable than experience in any situation. More detail.
Indeed, sometimes, experience restrict imagination. Before 18th century when the industrial revolution started, technology is trivial. Humans’ habits and experiences told us that it is impossible that technology substitutes humans’ hands one day. If precursors constrained their habits and attitudes in order to make them commensurate with experiences, we would not able to talk distantly by cell phone, travel by airplane, or search information online.
This can be elaborated in the following way. In a case where one lacks experience, imagination can be used as a tool to enhance creativity hence putting once goals in perspective. This is because through imagination one has the ability to think of creative ideas that can be used as solutions to the existing problems. At this point of view, although both imagination and experience have value, imagination is more valuable because it lacks boundaries and disciplines hence one can be able to think of the solutions of the problems from scratch without necessarily having to align oneself to established facts. In essence, imagination can be seen as the basis of innovation since it accepts new ideas that do not have to be backed up facts.
However, when the claim alone is made without supporting it with the reason provided, the claim ceases to hold any waters. First, both imagination and experience have value on their own hence one cannot be said to be more valuable than the other. Imagination can make one to be creative, while experience makes one to be the master.
Experience is very valuable in daily life. When an organization hire new employees, they prefer the candidates with more experiences. When parents choose schools for their children, they prefer teachers with more years’ educational experiences. Experience is even more important than imagination in some field, such as medical staffs, before they accumulate enough experiences, they can only be trainee doctors. A doctor cannot only use imagination or creativity to diagnose and cure patients. Experience is the indispensable value for a doctor.
Otherwise, experience can be said to be a basis for the foundation of imagination since it is very difficult to have a person come up with ideas only by imagining. There has to be some form of established facts that gives an individual the ability to think beyond boundaries already set and come up with new ideas through imagination. Wright brothers’ Wright Flyer was inspirited by birds. And Edison’s light bulb was an improvement on previous electronical light - which was not have practical use. Both Wright brothers and Edison’s inventions came from facts or previous experiences.
Thus, saying that imagination is more valuable than experience without any reason is wrong. Imagination is the important part of modern life advancement; however, experience provides foundation of imagination and it is indispensable in daily life. experience and imagination interwoven to make human life process. Experience provides foundation for imagination, imagination breaks the experience boundaries to make a creative idea, and then experience optimizes the idea. It would not be so contradictory that both experience and imagination are equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 52.0 12.9106741573 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3005.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 547.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49360146252 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1539873803 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449725776965 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 979.2 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5804163802 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254599072001 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081134908319 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802171442976 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152354938669 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10164663934 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.