Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the emergence of various scientific fields, there have been demands for fast precise calculations and enormous memories to save such intensive human knowledge. Therefore, in my point of view, the creation of computer is immensely important either a century ago or today.
First of all, the computer was invented by a number of extraordinary scientists and engineers who have conducted thousands of research for a long time. As a result, this device is a powerful one that can deal with a wide range of complicated calculations with a high level of accuracy / few errors / reliable results.
Secondly, computers can solve the unemployment issue in our modern society. A graduate who cannot find a job related to their major tends to choose computer repair for a livelihood. This job requires relatively short training and there is a growing demand for computer repair from households.
Finally, the introduction of computers has changed the way people work. Previously office workers used to create handwritten letters, which is time-consuming. Today, however, documents can be typed with the help of a computer.
Despite the massive benefits of computers, electricity plays an even more important role in human civilization. In fact, computers and almost every other machine cannot operate without electricity.
In a nutshell, it is obvious that computers are considered the most significant creation of human beings for the last century given its various advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03977209805 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.44161512 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171915526757 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549183755151 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318389398087 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826554093512 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265739373205 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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