Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions?
These days, human are being progressively replaced by artificial intelligent robots in workshop. Athought it is possible that all the physical, unskilled works will required machine, it is impossible to perform work that deals with precise skilled and human feelings. This essay will demonstrates only minor work will be perform by human being.
Eventually, all the works that does not need any specific knowledge but only require labour will be mechanized by the robots.
Many factories and companies believed that if those menial jobs are dine by automatic machine, it could save both time and money rather than spending upon hiring, training and employing human. In restaurants in nepal,for instance, many waiter and cashier have being replaced by artificial machines that consume less money. Futhermore, those artificial robots can work all day and night without any rest and salary,so that human labour will be changed with robotic intelligence, if only it doesn't need any sort of skilled to perform work.
On the contrary, there are certain jobs that can not be replaced by robots because manmade robots can never reach to real human's brain.In simple way, to do such as doctor, medicines and social work,ones must have both skilled and emotions, which is absence in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by skilled human,it cannot be satisfied. Hence robots will never be able to achieve those skills of human which are exist in human's brain.
Highly sophisticated,complex works will always need human skills, however unskilled will eventually completed by robots. For these reason only few workwill be available for human in today's world.it is most likely that machine will continued its employment by replacing human in most
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'demonstrate'
Suggestion: demonstrate
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dined'.
Suggestion: dined
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...employing human. In restaurants in nepal,for instance, many waiter and cashier have ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun waiter seems to be countable; consider using: 'many waiters'.
Suggestion: many waiters
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...ts can never reach to real humans brain.In simple way, to do such as doctor, medic...
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Suggestion: , ones
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...hose works are not done by skilled human,it cannot be satisfied. Hence robots will ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...y skilled human,it cannot be satisfied. Hence robots will never be able to achieve th...
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Suggestion: complete
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Suggestion: continue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for instance, sort of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67601552349 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7822606461 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202027504839 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936207958789 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038666741973 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132363475865 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019132265436 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.