Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To specialize in many academic subjects can give you in school or university better grades, but eventually you would not know your direction such as find a job. have broad knowledge broadens the mind. but in some cases be professional in one direction, specialize in one specific subject can be the reason to find a satisfactory job. personally, I disagree with the statement, which states that have broad knowledge is better than to specialize in one subject. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
first of all, nowadays profession">professionals in one specific lesson is more actual. If there will be decision between two humans, such as profession">professional in one academic subject and other one is that , who has broadened horizons, employer would choose the first person. because he will do work as better as he can and he know how to improve working company. my own experience is compelling example of this. when my aunt applied to one place where needed assistant of financier. she could not passed the interview. because she was lawyer by profession. May be she knows financial affairs, but there was needed the profession">professional of this job.
Secondly, I suggest to be interested in one academic lesson because of the future job. when person interested in one subject can easily predict his future job. For instance, I was the olympiad student from mathematics. eventually, from the primary school I started to have interests in mathematics. when you know mathematics it will give you some interests in it sphere. While others was in doubt which profession they should decide, I chose my future job. So, from my reasons you can easily understand that I want to be a financier.
In conclusion, my advice to everyone is to specialize in one academic subject. this is because of the easy decisions about future job and requirements of modern companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75581819852 2.67179642975 141% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512578616352 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.102429592 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1818181818 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30107137804 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853449222645 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10141934851 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19552993279 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154372371512 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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