The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
This is the generation of valuable advancements in the fields of technology, science and space exploration. Everyday the technology seems to be better and efficient than the previous day. The prompt suggests that there are more issues being created due to the increase in the pace of life today which is not entirely acceptable because of the following two reasons.
To begin, the technological advancements today made our lives far simpler than anyone could ever imagine. This development includes mobile communication, air transport and internet. For instance, we are able to communicate through internet via social media while travelling on an airplane with someone sitting at their desktop hundreds of miles away. Without these technological advancements, abundance of energy, patience and time is needed.
Secondly, the life span of the man has drastically increased due to the significant achievements in the fields of sciences and medicine. Many diseases and infections which were once considered deadly are now expurgated due to advent of vaccines. For example diseases like chickenpox, smallpox and measles which eradicated half of the population in the early nineteenth century are now completely eradicated from the face of the planet. Furthermore, research in treating cancer by stem cell has been proven successful in the primates. According to a survey, the life span of Homo sapiens has drastically increased to 70 years.
Thirdly, the sources of energy are depleting commensurate with the increase in the world population. The need for inexhaustible sources of energy is rapidly increasing. With the growing trend in technology, it is now feasible to extract energy even from the waste. The biomass energy is now playing a major role in developing countries. This form of energy is not only environment friendly but also available at least cost. As the population in increasing at an unpredictable rate the use of these “zero pollution” energy sources are gaining importance more than ever.
In conclusion, there are few impediments and negative impacts due to these advancements which cannot be avoided. But the comfort experienced is exorbitant when compared to negative impacts. Therefore, the rapid technological growth solves many intricate problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...hnology, science and space exploration. Everyday the technology seems to be better and e...
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Line 9, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... growth solves many intricate problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51420454545 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11234524492 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5147441516 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174788754914 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426754680842 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060224789448 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086176600399 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572812474024 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.