Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
"Health is wealth" is a common saying, which highlights the importance of personal fitness. This fitness is both related to a healthy mind and a healthy body, a perfect combination of a nutritious diet, a stress-free mind, and enough exercise. However, in developing countries like Pakistan, it is a bit difficult to maintain all this. In this essay, I will elaborate on a few suggestions to stay healthy for people of this country.
Firstly, everyone should consider a positive change in lifestyle such as including a light brisk walk and avoiding junk food. This will not only help them in staying fit physically but also mentally active and strong. In this way, one could avoid several hazardous diseases; brain strokes, heart attacks, and kidney malfunctioning. According to the latest British research, 80% of obese persons were the ones with sedentary lifestyles.
Secondly, employers in corporate sectors should introduce short breaks during working hours. Working from 9 am to 5 pm constantly could develop mental pressure and cause burnout to the employees. High workload usually causes social isolation and effect personal lives and relationships as well. Most of the people are suffering complications in balancing personal and work life. For instance, in Japan, every year 1132 persons visit mental hospitals due to work stress.
In the nutshell, fitness and wellbeing is the need of today's society. It is the responsibility of one's self to take care of his health by having an active lifestyle. Moreover, organizations should change the corporate attitude towards workers. All these small changes will make a big difference by helping people in staying physically and mentally fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 99, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38148148148 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94083403155 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674074074074 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1655211643 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4705882353 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148246139508 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411174335189 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365300162183 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806208337204 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387085546154 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.