A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Diet and healthy food make a healthy person. In addition to that we should avoid stress and get plenty of exercise. This essay totally agrees that people ought to change some habits in order to be more healthy. This essay gives some solutions should people do to stay healthy in my country.
Firstly, healthy foods is the most important habit effect on our health because the good choice for healthy not only does give us the important nutrition but also it gives us the power to our body to avoid illness. For instance, in 2017, research has been published by the world health organization should that healthy food helps our body to avoid diseases such as Cancer.
Secondly, encouraging sport is the most important thing people should keen on doing it. Exercise such as walking really important to the health of body especially blood pressure. For example, 3 years ago, I was have some illness on my heart but when I started to do the walking every day for an hour that problem has been gone.
In conclusion, healthy food and sport should be encouraged in my country by the decision makers in order to keep people health on my country. It is recommended that government ought to make more advertisement which shows the importance of healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...essure. For example, 3 years ago, I was have some illness on my heart but when I sta...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h shows the importance of healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76605504587 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44648556957 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2007835074 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239144045716 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102973090915 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639830608859 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146788852484 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645073868368 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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