Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.
peoples addetute is changing between eachother all the time as life is getting faster and there is no time to learn how to respect eachother. Nowadays young generation do not have same paradimes how to be polite and respectful. Causes can be directed by faster life tempo therefore solution is to spend more time with educate the what is apropiate and what is not.
From history we will find that peoples lifes ware not as organized and fast as today. Father was the on who brought food to table and mother raised children. todays modern world we see that often both parent are working long hours and children`s are in childcare. after long day parents are exhausted and have no energy left to deal with children. that illustrates perfectly how fast life tempo influences how we connect with our children.
To tackle the problem, we should find more time than few hours after work hours. In weekdays many parent interect with childe only 20 precent of time what is left from work. it is not enough to teach behaveours and skills. todays society do not have as rich traditions in politeness and respectfulness as it used to be. solution would be in shorter work hours. Instead of 5 days in week we should cot it to 2 days. In order to teach children behavior skill we need to spend full days with them.
To conclude, why young people behavior has changes trough time and what is solution? Over the time peoples life has rapidly gone faster. therefore, many behaveour skills have been unteached. solution is to take more time for children ecucation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, as to, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48323748876 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2458795075 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2105263158 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78947368421 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144760510858 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460939300912 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460665225433 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918701699045 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449074720542 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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