Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although, it is believed by some people that the major environmental challenge of this dispensation is extinction of a category of plants and animals, other people opine that there are more crucial issues. In my own opinion, I consider other environmental problems such as pollution a more important environmental problem.
On the one hand, some people believe that losing some species of plants and animals is a major environmental problem. To have a balance ecosystem, there should be an equilibrium between plants and animals,loss of these plants and animals have led to depletion of atmospheric oxygen and carbon dioxide resulting in imbalance. For example, Bush burning and tree cutting by man leads to oxygen reduction and an increase in carbon dioxide because plant is one of the main source of oxygen.
On the other hand, other environmental problems such as pollution is considered a major challenge and I agree. Modernization and technology has led to construction of more industries, these factories produces a lot of waste which result in environmental pollution which is harmful to man and other living things,for instance, in 1992 calcecom dump it's waste in the sea and many see animals died. Furthermore, waste produced by these factories result in climate change and consequently global warming.
In conclusion, while it is believed that loss of some species of plants and animals is a problem in this era,I agree that other issues such as pollu6is more crucial and lead ill-health in man and even death.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25506072874 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00387943258 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506072874494 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3065547 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.222222222 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305762310745 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144968118965 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104738061699 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200586710778 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106444319924 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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