In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
These days, the chances of getting an education overseas abound, while before now, that has to happen in one's own country. Students can receive qualitative pedagogy and land more lucrative jobs, but, there are also drawbacks to be considered.
Firstly, one benefit of studying abroad is an opportunity for a high ranking education. This enables favorable competition with counterparts across the globe. Secondly, having a world-class degree from overseas breathes benefits because of the job openings it avails, thereby allowing for greater earnings. Upon graduation, for instance, work done is valued at high esteem with enormous income cum other privileges, compared to the work-pay ratio done in some other developing countries. Thirdly, schooling abroad is made lenient to accomplish, juxtaposed with having to go through other processes at acquiring the same end result.
On the other hand, one danger of studying abroad is that a vacuum is created, leading to longing for beloved ones in a protracted time. It is mostly until years after schooling is over that one may come home, because, traveling back home at every break could be considered frivolous as such money can be rather put to better use in school. Another plausible challenge is the possibility of returning home from an overseas study which is almost non-existent, as such, there is a continual plummeting of adequately trained hands in the most crucial field of their economy, for instance, the health care system, power, housing, education, and transporttion sector sector the country.
In conclusion, while there are huge benefits from studying abroad, students may be compelled to stay away from beloved ones and their home countries would suffer their scarcity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39416058394 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76344619572 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0797837933 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14677521965 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570695725626 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396430672498 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907899450954 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219969207685 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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