Some people say that social media is a digital drug that has left many people addicted enhanced their lots of valuable time while others say social media has Enable Connectivity with the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion on the topic.
It has been an issue of debate whether internet is fecund or it is futile for human. Although, some individuals believe that most of the people are wasting their time on this platform, whilst others think that with the help of social media anyone can install unknown connectivity with the world. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss both views and give my opinion.
Evidently, there is nothing left that we can not do with our smartphones including paying electricity bill, shopping something, gathering information so on. However, some of the futile social media applications addicted people improperly . For instance, playing online games is most eminent thing nowadays, maximum proportion of youth is defectively connected to these games and as a result it affects their academic score.
On the other hand, internet has been helping people by allowing them to connect along with the world. For example, we can now effortlessly watch the mundane activities of the space as well as we can explore it without any difficulty. Furthermore, many of rudimentary amenities could be gotten by the social media such as purchasing goods, attending online study classes so on. By doing these things people can save their most pivotal time comfortably.
In my opinion, social media plays an enormous role in our lives. To illustrate, a person can now watch his relatives or friends with the help of internet. Secondly, there have some inevitable drawbacks of it for example, too much involvement on this site can change people's attitude towards reality such as he or she can become an extravagant and probably they can become counterfeit person.
To recapitulate, I would further like to state that advancement in technology is essential but people should consume it scrupulously because may it gives detrimental ramifications to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86900780786 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6336593566 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282558081106 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102786182763 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897944943236 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157932073853 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081264714774 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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