When designing building the most important factor is intended to use the building rather than it's outwards of appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, safety, basic functionality, and magnificent appearance are the crucial role of many monuments and buildings. When preparing for a blueprint of building construction the principal part is only for the usage of it, rather than its outer look. In my opinion, magnificent designs are important to attract tourism towards the nation but basic facility and safety precautions are the most important to prevent the big mishappening.
On the one hand, in recent times awesome structures are created by many countries, which are not only added the values of the building but also attract the tourists and featuring on international geographic channels. For example, Dubai is famous for an awesome building like Burj Khalifa, which is known for its unique design and magnificent appearance, which attracts millions of tourists and displaying on many geographic channels.
On the other hand, the ordinary functionality of the building must be considered. To illustrate this, high-rise buildings like a hospital in which the infrastructure of a building must be convenient and comfortable for the patients. For example, Basic functions like proper air ventilation system, lifts and the slopes so geriatric patients can easily move to another place on wheelchairs.
Moreover, safety measurements are the most important factor for any constructions or monuments. To explain this, without implementing measurements like a fire alarm, emergency exits, the well-establish base of the building and many more, which create disaster and put danger on many lives. For example, in Surat city, 41 people died in the fire in a building because there were no fire alarms and emergency exit.
In conclusion, I believe that safety and functionality are the core of any structure, but external beauty can not be completely ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47349823322 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10811081808 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6623532976 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170190130631 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652893167588 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046068801284 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862512165118 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498053408415 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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