The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The premise says that "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields". Most of the proponents are willing to be a leader for any organization but, here come the disputes between being a good sense of co-operation and not competition.
Firstly, from my point of view, I totally agree with the statement given above because one should have a good sense of co-operation then they can meet their goals in the future and should be noted that competition should also be a part of it. Let's take an instance for better understanding, a student on one hand in the classroom is attending all the classes and having a good knowledge and also answering the questions which are asked by the faculty and is known as bookaholic. On the other hand, a student who is well behaved and knows how to maintain friends who are in needy and knows the qualities of being a leader. By seeing these two situations we can easily state that the student who has knowledge is not adaptable compared to the student who knows how to treat the people in the class. The quality of being a leader must have the ability to read people's mindsets and should know the needy ones.
Secondly, let's draw an instance from the Multi-National companies that most of the people are baffled to take a step ahead in the MNC's because of the reason known as "COMPETITION". Why because the people are coming from the Bachelor Of Technology or Degree based background and since there are more and more people were passing out from the colleges. There will be a huge competition between the people who have better knowledge and the people who are having average knowledge but the main issue here is the company will recruit based on academics but not on the sense of co-operation. So, this is where we need to get development in leadership skills. It is not only used in the MNC's but also very useful in the Human's Life when we are dealing with an individual person.
Eventually, I conclude that the best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in any field should have a sense of co-operation and should avoid the mindset of having competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ompetition should also be a part of it. Lets take an instance for better understandi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70025839793 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80994178293 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475452196382 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6650446123 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.923076923 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7692307692 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267658915821 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102670874648 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142697344589 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233528470698 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152249585545 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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