Computers are being more and more in education Discuss the advantage and disadvantage with your opinion

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Computers are being more and more in education.
Discuss the advantage and disadvantage with your opinion.

In the context of today's world technology has made humans life well and prosperous .By the assist of technology world has been in people's hand . And most significant things is that it plays the vital role in school and Universities.And some benefits and drawbacks are hightlited below.
Due to advanced technology project assignment can accelerate at certain time and we can store the large amount of data in little space .By the help of computer we can gain knowledge and idea about different sort of task which we are unaware .Also we can attend online course through the technology.student can get freedom to attach in computer such that they able to find most comfortable education.so that they can acquire better achievement . According to the recent research it was found that the majority of youngstar are success by the aid of technology in education .An increase in technology it provides more beneficial for both student and teaching methods.
The main drawbacks is associated with increasing in technology in education is the decrease of face to face interaction between students .They may be misutlisation of technology by the teenagers cyber crime for instance robbery ,socialharresment ,theft and kidnapping may arise . It also hamper in the study of young and child by spending more and more time in computer and other Accessories.
All in all, student can get significant information through advance technology if it is use properly otherwise,it will directly affect the life of student and user of technology.so technology should be at proper way. Implementation of strict rules and regulations must be there those who misused the technology in different crime sector.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for instance, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22140221402 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12597366152 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.326111305 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.875 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125553822477 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621399196393 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710320098032 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774220310674 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075284913765 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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