Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking problems and suggest some solution.
.What are the problems.
. Why should solve the problems.
. How to solve the problems.
Dear Sir,
I am Bharat Prajapati, working as a full-time employee in IT department of Matrix Solutions as a Network Engineer. I am writing this letter to grievance regarding vehicle parking issue since long time.
Our office building has no any parking space. Therefor, all staff suffer where to park own vehicle. Our firm located at the centre of town and it is congested too. Moreover, locality is too posh as I can not afford higher rent to stay near to office. Thus, i rented a flat outside the city at where rent is cheaper than this place. Apart from this public transportation stoppage is also far away from our location so, we have to board an auto and sometimes have to walk due to long queue in hiring an auto and reach office with low energy.
Our organization has more than fifty number of staff who suffer daily due to unavailable of parking space. Few colleagues stopped drive to office in their personal vehicle due to space issue and getting late intermittently to reach at office.
Near to our building at walking distance there is one open space of private owner. I know him very well and he has no any plan to build anything in near future so we can rent that space for parking.
I hope to solve this issue very soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Bharat Prajapati.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e long time. Our office building has no any parking space. Therefor, all staff ...
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Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gher rent to stay near to office. Thus, i rented a flat outside the city at where...
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Line 10, column 116, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... owner. I know him very well and he has no any plan to build anything in near futu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65502183406 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47697199179 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8141855275 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1428571429 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0510568662243 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227766470326 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277778427002 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0355904921483 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031304131469 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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