Some people claim that many things that children are taught at school are a waste of time. Other people argue that everything children study at school is useful at some time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
As the advent of technological products and the proliferation of the Internet have diversified learning approaches, people hold various opinions on whether the things taught at school are useful or not. In my view, many things obtained at school are meaningful, although there is some time wasted for a few children.
Admittedly, there exists a growing recognition that school learning is a waste of time. A main reason is the lack of personalized learning mode at school. some students say that their teachers often spend much time explaining something they have already understood. In addition, schools are usually thought to emphasize more on academic subjects than practical issues relevant to future careers. For instance, children are forced to study history or math while they may engage in totally different fields for the rest life, leading to their negative attitudes towards school learning.
However, a wide range of things acquired at school should not be overlooked. For some students, systematic teaching provides a solid foundation for their further major. For others, it may be a matter of time for the knowledge to shine a light, as they will inevitably use it is in many cases like history in broadening their horizons or math in managing household finances. Except for these theoretical knowledge, the morality social skills cultivated through learning from teachers and peers benefit students significantly. A typical example is that those equipped with qualities like honesty, punctuality and communicativeness generally gain more popularity in the job market.
In conclusion, schools need improvements like custom learning experience to reduce time wasted but they still play an important role in ensuring a comprehensive and wholesome education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, except for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in many cases, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49270072993 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98767826731 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64598540146 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0064832492 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321850770724 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116348019881 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108067641998 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213139484141 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145240814124 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.