wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such a food and housing.
to what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is believed that people from under developed countries shall be freely accepted by the developed nations and give them basic amenities of shelter and food. I completely agree with the above statement as it improves relationship between countries and provide a message of humanity to other nations.
The primary needs given to the refugee by the wealthy countries aids to build a better relationship between the two countries. As the developed countries are well versed with all the resources required for the shelter in terms of money as well as equipments. This is beneficial in ways that the developed countries will get a huge amount of man power in return of the shelter and food. Moreover, this built a good rapport between both the countries as they have given their hand in need which in turn dissolve all the grudges prevailing between them.
Furthermore, the act of helping developing country in need presents a powerful message of humanity to the other nations in the world. As a result, other countries can learn that helping is part of life and people should always offer help to those in need even if they do not belong from their origin country. This in turn bring peace and prosperity among all the nations of the world and make the earth a better place to live.
In conclusion, in my opinion offering help to developing countries should be encouraged as it can bring peace around the world and develop better relation between the countries
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs given" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'given' or 'to be given'.
Suggestion: given; to be given
... to other nations. The primary needs given to the refugee by the wealthy countries...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...hem. Furthermore, the act of helping developing country in need presents a powerful mes...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.872 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58167077684 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.4753510348 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.8 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177240021837 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738866763479 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424789521196 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115003574326 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569030533165 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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