More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems do this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?
A growing number of people in developing nations are buying their own vehicles for the first time. While this is a sign of affluence, it can have a negative impact on the environment.
The main issue associated with the increasing numbers of vehicles is high levels of carbon dioxide emission. Since developing countries have significantly higher population than developed countries, when more people drive cars there the result is a harmful increase in air pollution. Needless to say, there is a dramatic increase in the incidences of respiratory ailments. For example, the major cities in China are suffering from serious atmospheric contamination, and the WHO reported more than five thousand cases of Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome and 300 deaths in many nations in 2008. The majority of them were in China.
Making public transport more reliable and cheaper is the most effective way to discourage the excessive use of private vehicles. Another long term solution to this predicament is to educate young people about the dangers of air contamination by exhaust gases from automobiles. Children in schools could be taught about how to reduce the problem. They are also likely to teach their parents about the things they learned at school and adults will also be influenced by this initiative. For instance, students in Netherlands were taught about consequences of driving their own car in a reckless manner, and now the number of drivers has declined. Furthermore, the most preferable transport for Dutch people is bicycles and using public transport or carpooling is common means to travel.
In conclusion, a growing number of people are driving their own vehicles, and this is leading to severe air pollution. The most effective method to tackle this issue is to wake up young generations to the dangers of the poor air quality.
- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing Some think this is good while others believe this is a problem for a country Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time What problems do this cause What do you think are the possible solutions 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a reckless manner" with adverb for "reckless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18394648829 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84541293329 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7932516364 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17982727308 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534601349456 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508657986298 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106395177205 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326652572094 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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