Some people think that we can use animals in any way for the benefits of human beings. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animals are of many benefits to the people but some believe that animals are misused and ill-treated by us for our needs. I believe other living creatures can be used to our benefit but only if we respect their existence and help their kinds.
Human needs food to survive like any other creature on the planet and vegetation is not possible in many parts of the world. Many animals give vital nutrition to humans and their remains can be of various use. For example cows and buffalos' provide milk which is processed into other dairy products. while, sheep and goats are used as food and clothing.
Additionally, we can use animals for entertainment, traveling and security. Such as, Horse racing has been a very famous sports in human history and are also used for traveling in remote places. where as dogs are used for security purpose and dogs as pet due to their friendly nature towards human.
Although, some people believe it utterly cruel to kill any creature or use them to your benefit. While humans have many other options to depend on for our basic needs. They can use new technics and modern ways to increase source of food without harming animal lives.
If the animals are only used to help people and their population is not take care of, this would disturb the nature cycle and cause ill effects on environment.
In my opinion, animals are very useful for humans survival and prosperity but only if we take considerable measures to take care for they kinds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76356589147 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34567866532 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1835275381 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411836702431 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142153368427 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643882224117 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209115030686 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675310750535 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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