You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday you had a small accident You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter Explain when and from where you rented it Describe how the accident happened what kind of acti

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You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter.
Explain when and from where you rented it
Describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you about a minor accident, which took place yesterday and I have filed a complaint in police station against the culprit.

I had rented car from the wallstreet branch of your company on 12th February 2020. I requested for a sedan cars as will be along with my family going on 3 days outsattion trip. While, returning home, we haulted at a restaurant for refreshments, were a biker tried to pass between the wall and our vehicle. In this process, he broke the passenger side rearview mirror and flew away.

However, luckily, I noted his plate number and immediately lodged an complaint against him. A copy of the car rental and police complaint is enclosed with this letter. The broken rear view mirror has been kept in the cars trunk. I assume the mirror can be fix using the same handle.

In case, any further infomation required. Please feel free to contact me on my mobile number mention in the rental form.

Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Agrawal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of your company on 12th February 2020. I requested for a sedan cars as will be a...
^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...his plate number and immediately lodged an complaint against him. A copy of the ca...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82080924855 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53246487216 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728323699422 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5979888626 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157274547993 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428815250732 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603652758846 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714191920502 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532515454933 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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